Nov 27, 2008

I don't Know

Life’s changing, I am changing

Why I am changing? I don’t know

They say be yourself, but I can’t see them doing that

Their friends are changing, they are changing

Why they are changing? I don’t know

My friends laugh at me; they say I am a fool

I feel sad, I feel bad

Am I a fool? I don’t know

I see her she sees me, we walk together but

She’s quite, I am quite

Why are we quite? I don’t know

In my dreams I see her smiling to me

Her shining eyes, her beautiful voice

Am I in love? I don’t know

May be she is not for me and she won’t accept me

But does that going to affect my life?

May be yes, may be no

Am I afraid? I don’t know



jack said...

Love doesnt bring anything if that is the only thing one craves for. Let it be a part of life, not life.

neil said...


Gaurav Shah said...

I dont Know reminded me Patnayak!
nice 1..
nice blog actully
- Gaurav Shah

Navchawla said...

@gaurav..hehe..rally? good tht u remembering professors even after the classes..lols

neha said...

hey naveen....this poetry is awesome....u kno wats the best part in ur poetries???dat u kept ur poetries vry simple and lucid....cheers...dude

Navchawla said...

@neha...thnx dear..glad to see your comments..keep visiting
hope u will like some more posts of mine

Arjun said...

I'm lovin this...
I love ur style of poetry.....
Enjoying every post...
Will catch up with other posts as soon as possible... :)


Prabudha said...

फिर से एक अच्छी रचना… फिर से बधाई

जब कभी ऐसा लगे कि पानी सर से ऊपर बह रहा है तो कड़ा फ़ैसला लेना चाहिये। शायद वो कुछ पल दुख के देता है, लेकिन आगे की ज़िन्दगी के लिए बहुत अच्छा होता है।

इसलिए इस से पहले कि रिश्तों की ग़ुलामी के रास्ते पर चलते आदमी के आत्म-सम्मान को ठेस पंहुचे, आदमी को अपना नया रास्ता बना लेना चाहिए।

एक शेर याद आता है कि

"राह-ए-उल्फ़त में आप साथ नहीं…

जाईए ख़ैर कोई बात नहीं"