I feel so good, after all I did
It feels like heaven, after all I did
It was difficult, it was painful
But ultimately I got the courage
It was amazing, it was beautiful
For I finally stopped being a sage
You called me that day, we had a talk
I showed you my heart and resolved it all
I know it would be hard for you
And maybe you will never gim’me a call
It would be good for both of us
For finally we can have a wrap
And you were already so far from me
It was difficult to bridge the gap
Finally, I broke the clutches
And I gave vent to my emotions
Finally, I hold no grudges
And it helped me get new directions
Finally, I see myself clearly
Now I can be who I am
Finally, I can forget you
Coz now I don’t give u a damn
I feel so good, after all I did
It feels like heaven, after all I did
7 comments:
Amazing Act Naveen. I am happy that you did what you wanted. Might sound like a rebel, but i think when the mind is filled with strange botherations, which create a lot of chaos, the best thing to do would be to do what you have always wanted to.
Raabindranath Tagore had written a poem, " Where the Mind is Without Fear", i follow the line completely.
Cheers For Naveen Chawla.
Once again, AMAZING POST.
@thnx dude...keep visiting..
these poems are just like drops of emotions pouring down ur feelings..and as i said life's a journey move on..applies to me too
hey naveen good work again, i guess we should always follow our heart, and do thing that i right to ourself at that point and time, that requires courage.. i am glad you are gaining that courage :)
keep posting
Man.. This was awesome....
I loved every part of it...
Kudos..!!
Cheers..!!
Arjun
अच्छी रचना है। फिर से बधाई।
आदमी को हमेशा वही करना चाहिए जो उसके मन में हो। अपने अस्तित्व को दूसरे के हवाले करने से ज़्यादा अच्छा है कि आदमी कुछ कठिन निर्णय ले कर क्षण भर का कष्ट भोग ले। थोड़ी तक़लीफ़ शुरू में हो सकती है, लेकिन बाद में पछतावा नहीं होता। और किसी एक के होने या ना होने से दुनिया खत्म नहीं हो जाती। एक शेर याद आता है कि -
'राह-ए-उल्फ़त में आप साथ नहीं
जाईए ख़ैर कोई बात नहीं'
Dude...my first here...dropped in from Writers lounge.. I actually write there..
Loved it...and it feels good when we get things we had wanted...Great!!! All the best dude..
Take care..keep writing..
thanx rajesh..keep posted
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