O God! Please listen to my prayer
Please don’t keep the sky so clear
And bring the shadows of the clouds
Let them pour and roar out aloud
I feel so lonely and so sad
I wish to cry and get so mad
But I don’t want them to know
About my misery, I don’t want to show
O thank you God, for listening to me
Thou poured from heavens and blessed me
These clouds I feel are just like me
Full with emotions but still don’t plea
They just burst out aloud
And let their pain get drowned
O, I have always loved these rains
For they help me hide my pains
Now, I can walk along the path without any fear
And they would not be able to notice my tears.
5 comments:
hey naveen that was amazing, i must say you improving as a peot, well rhyming was too good, i some how lack it in my poems
well the title could have been more apt but all in all good work
thanx bro..its all your inspiration that i m here right now...all credits to u!
Probably your best yet...
Charlie Chaplin, the REAL comedy king, once said,"I love to walk in rain so no one can see my tears."
He must be happy reading this, wherever he may be. may his soul rest in peace... Aameen!
good rhyming, and great words!
@prabudha thanx bro..u were the one who taught me this skill..u see..so all credit of rhyming words goes to u..thanx a lot
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