Feb 10, 2009

The way I would Propose!



That perfect night, the perfect smile

The perfect time, the perfect line

To tell you the truth

Another time, another day

Another boy, in another way

Gonna tell this to you

But you need to listen to me

Coz that’s gonna make me free

And that’s how I want it to be

I know that you are the one for me

 

I am alive, n I will survive

But take this dive, for my life

To make it more meaningful

I want you, n I need you

I care for you, n I love you

Gonna make life colorful

And you need to listen to me

Coz that’s gonna make me free

And that’s how I want it to be

I know that you are the one for me

 

Time will come, n time will go

The memories will always show

The love that we made

The sun will rise, the sun will set

Flowers blossom, blight they’ll get

Your beauty will never fade

Ooh please come and listen to me

Coz that’s gonna make me free

And that’s how I want it to be

You’ll always be the one for me

P.S. Try singing this at the tune of Graham Colton's Best Days, you would feel the song ;) 

Crossposted at The Writer's Lounge


17 comments:

the pink orchid said...

the poetry is beautiful.. :)

Pretty Me!! said...

sooooo sweet :) loved it :D

Navchawla said...

@kajal
thanx for the lovely comments keep visiting

Navchawla said...

@prats
thnk u soo much..keep visiting :)

Femin Susan said...

Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job!

Navchawla said...

@Femin
Thnx for the beautiful comments...keep visiting :)

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Ah! Now that Feb 14 is around the corner! Very well written Nav!

Anirudh induchudan said...

nice expression

Navchawla said...

thanx rakesh...actually u can also use it..after my permission..lols

Navchawla said...

welcome anirudh..thnx for commenting..keep visiting :)

Tan said...

Well, I never heard the song you told about - but given that or not, the words you chose to construct the poem are lucid and grace!

Clarity of thought!!

Loved it mate ... keep writing ;)

PS: plz remove the WORD VERIFICATION - we all are human here :D

Navchawla said...

dear tan
thank u very much for visiting..ur comments are really motivating

I have no idea how to remove the word identification..can u help me out with tht?

the pink orchid said...

@Nav: I had your comments here being mailed to me "I always do a follow up of comments of posts that I loved reading" :)
so I came to know of your doubt reagarding word verification..it's simple Nav.

1. Go to settings.
2. In settings, you have lot of links like basic, permission, openID etc.
3. Comments is one such link.
4. Click on the "comments" link and you will find a question regarding word verification. Some thing like "workd verification - with options: yes/no"

you click on "no" and voila word veirifation leaves us forever, or until you reactivate it using the same procedure.. :)
hope that helps..
c ya..

Navchawla said...

Thank u kajal :) ...oops! I thought it's allowed here :P

the pink orchid said...

nahin ji nahi chalega..!

Navchawla said...

ookiesss :P

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