That perfect night, the perfect smile
The perfect time, the perfect line
To tell you the truth
Another time, another day
Another boy, in another way
Gonna tell this to you
But you need to listen to me
Coz that’s gonna make me free
And that’s how I want it to be
I know that you are the one for me
I am alive, n I will survive
But take this dive, for my life
To make it more meaningful
I want you, n I need you
I care for you, n I love you
Gonna make life colorful
And you need to listen to me
Coz that’s gonna make me free
And that’s how I want it to be
I know that you are the one for me
Time will come, n time will go
The memories will always show
The love that we made
The sun will rise, the sun will set
Flowers blossom, blight they’ll get
Your beauty will never fade
Ooh please come and listen to me
Coz that’s gonna make me free
And that’s how I want it to be
You’ll always be the one for me
P.S. Try singing this at the tune of Graham Colton's Best Days, you would feel the song ;)
Crossposted at The Writer's Lounge
17 comments:
the poetry is beautiful.. :)
sooooo sweet :) loved it :D
@kajal
thanx for the lovely comments keep visiting
@prats
thnk u soo much..keep visiting :)
Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job!
@Femin
Thnx for the beautiful comments...keep visiting :)
Ah! Now that Feb 14 is around the corner! Very well written Nav!
nice expression
thanx rakesh...actually u can also use it..after my permission..lols
welcome anirudh..thnx for commenting..keep visiting :)
Well, I never heard the song you told about - but given that or not, the words you chose to construct the poem are lucid and grace!
Clarity of thought!!
Loved it mate ... keep writing ;)
PS: plz remove the WORD VERIFICATION - we all are human here :D
dear tan
thank u very much for visiting..ur comments are really motivating
I have no idea how to remove the word identification..can u help me out with tht?
@Nav: I had your comments here being mailed to me "I always do a follow up of comments of posts that I loved reading" :)
so I came to know of your doubt reagarding word verification..it's simple Nav.
1. Go to settings.
2. In settings, you have lot of links like basic, permission, openID etc.
3. Comments is one such link.
4. Click on the "comments" link and you will find a question regarding word verification. Some thing like "workd verification - with options: yes/no"
you click on "no" and voila word veirifation leaves us forever, or until you reactivate it using the same procedure.. :)
hope that helps..
c ya..
Thank u kajal :) ...oops! I thought it's allowed here :P
nahin ji nahi chalega..!
ookiesss :P
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