You sung a hundred songs
With beautiful words
And we sat under the tree
The chirping of the birds
But now I realize,
They were all lies.
It looked so beautiful
When everything was calm and cool
But now the days are gone
Your heart turned into stone
In the climate, I felt the heat
And it became harder to breathe
And you made me realize,
That they were all lies.
You told me how you felt
And I had to regret
Coz I made mistakes
Your ego was at stakes
And now I realize,
They were all lies.
You asked me to move on
Like it never happened
But how can I forget
The plans that I had set
My life became a misery
But now it’s a history
Coz you made me realize,
They were all lies.
You told me right
It was just a dream of the night
And the night was gone
So why should I mourn
Now I made my mind
That I shall not be kind
And I have to fight
This battle like a knight
Coz now I realize,
They were all lies.
Yes, I realize
They all were lies.
10 comments:
Dear bro, this is the breeziest piece of poetry I have come across in a long time, a really welcome change from the mundane and prosaic ones I read as well as write.. :), my bro has overshadowed me and surprisingly I'm feeling proud of you..keep writing..it is the best form of self realization..
hey too good bro, thats really amazing the flow of poem, about the content well really apt for certain situation..hope you dont generalise it keep writing
hey ........awesome poem. straight from d heart.
Good work bro,really to pen down something from ur heart is what rarely people do. This situation,when there is a downturn a soothing poetry is like a ice in a desert.:).
The best part is,we need to read and can are relieved of not listening d explanation for hours from the great writer.
Yes, I do realize
I loved all your lies
Nice song..... hope i completed it in a positive note....find a composer for this 1
good job....keep it up!!
great job dude...what r u doin in ICFAI....write few more lines like this and u would be popular enough to hire few MBA's....but tell me one thing ...what do u guys eat in ICFAI mess???? everybody starts writing and that too so gud...keep it up bro....
@misbu..thnx buddy..this was my first ever experience of writing a poem..about mess..well we dont eat much there u know y..lols..keep visiting for more
hey naveen u kno my comments very well....this poetry is amazin...its very hard fr someone to express his or her feelings in words....only ppl with extraordinary intelligence can do dat.....and u r undoubtedly one of them...keep writing...all the best buddy
@neha..thanx for the compliments..i will surely keep posting
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